For dramatic effect

Lady Val's underwear somehow went underwater.

Next page is last.

4 replies to “For dramatic effect”

  1. Weiser

    And how can it be that next page is the last one? In my fantasies the story right now starts to gather speed ...
    Ulandra grabs the necklace and a wild chase begins. Ulandra's rapist (Oran?) is among her pursuers, but then ... boof!! or so....  

    • Inkdolls

      Yikes, what a blunder, thanks. Necklace is right, I had to go look up what word I had used before: pendant.

      I meant last page of chapter, sorry.

  2. jamie59

    Don't see a big fish.

    • Inkdolls

      Good point. Looks like there are no monsters here.