14/Oct/2019

For dramatic effect

Lady Val's underwear somehow went underwater.

Next page is last.

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4 replies to “For dramatic effect”

  1. Weiser
    14/10/2019 |  # 

    "Necklace"?
    And how can it be that next page is the last one? In my fantasies the story right now starts to gather speed ...
    Ulandra grabs the necklace and a wild chase begins. Ulandra's rapist (Oran?) is among her pursuers, but then ... boof!! or so....  

    • Inkdolls
      15/10/2019 |  # 

      Yikes, what a blunder, thanks. Necklace is right, I had to go look up what word I had used before: pendant.

      I meant last page of chapter, sorry.

  2. jamie59
    14/10/2019 |  # 

    Don't see a big fish.

    • Inkdolls
      15/10/2019 |  # 

      Good point. Looks like there are no monsters here.